Comments on [Gift] A Linguan Orchestra



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Okay it took me 5 million years to properly comment on this but HERE I GO!!!

>>>Each member here, sitting in their squeaky and ancient chairs, deserved their spot.

Awww this is such a sweet sentence, and also the squeaky and ancient chairs detail is a delight.

>>>The small group cheered, awkwardly holding instruments so they could clap for the short speech.

Love this mental image!!!

>>>Bilha had just fainted clean off her chair at the energy in the room, and her own rising anxiety transferred from her bandleader.

ACCURATE, Bilha would 100% do this dsfskjghkjfd

>>>“Sorry about that, you know how it is sometimes,” she gently waved Oboe’s paws away, and sat up -- almost too quickly. “Whoops!” She gratefully took her clarinet from Akogare’s hands, patting her hands like a loving grandma. “Once Pastorale gets here and we can all begin I’ll feel much better!”

YES YES YES you absolutely nailed Bilha's personality here!

>>>While Paralogos didn’t need to eat, sometimes the experience of a freshly-baked treat -- or water to soothe a singing throat -- was too much to resist.

Sometimes you just need a SNACK

>>>“See ya later, pepper man,”

PEPPER MAN

>>>Bilha gripped the area of her chest where a heart would’ve been on a non-magical animal, but luckily stayed planted firmly on her feet.

shfkdsjfhfds B L E S S

>>>Nothing would beat the magic created by their very own paws and voices.

Aaaaa I teared up at this last line, what a lovely story! Thank you so much for including Bilha in it!!! <333

2021-12-06 12:19:30 (Edited 2021-12-06 12:20:22)